A Train Station Long Abandoned

A detail of my painting Train Tunnel

A detail of my painting Train Tunnel

The following excerpt from my novel is from my young narrator, Brooklyn’s point of view. It was inspired by an abandoned subway station—Myrtle Avenue—a ghostly platform that the Brighton Beach Express sped past throughout my childhood.

 

At last I find a platform. I sit down on a bench and wait and wait, but trains just keep speeding by. Maybe I’m supposed to go back upstairs. I look, but the stairway’s bricked up, so I climb down the steps at the end of the platform and walk into the dark train tunnel. I walk and walk and as I walk I run my fingers along a snaking yellow pipe, like a handrail on the sooty wall. The tunnel gets narrower and narrower and then it’s painted with red and white stripes and the words: Danger, No Clearance.

 

The ground starts shaking. Two lights like yellow eyes rush at me, getting huge, filling the tunnel. I slam back into a niche just as the train rushes by, rattling and clanking. In the cars whizzing past I glimpse blank-faced people, mostly old, not one of them looking out of the dirty glass windows.

 

I couldn't find a photograph of the Myrtle Avenue stop, but here's another abandoned platform, the Hoyt-schermerhorn stop.

I couldn’t find a photograph of the Myrtle Avenue stop, but here’s a similar, but less shadowy, abandoned platform, the Hoyt-schermerhorn stop.

 

Another abandoned station: New York City Hall

Another abandoned station, prettier this time: New York City Hall

 

And while I’m at it:

 

Coney Island/Stillwell Avenue is the terminal stop—come here and you leave Manhattan behind, one reason it’s ideal for escapism.

 

The train to Coney Island wasn’t always elevated. It started out as a steam line in 1875, which opened the island to the millions. It was electrified in 1899, and elevated in 1919. I’m told that the inhabitants of the shantytown I described in a previous post came there to build it and stayed. There were also trolley cars. I remember seeing the tracks when I was a kid.

 

The attraction—

This is romantic, is it not?

Photo: Simon Pielow on Flickr

Photo: Simon Pielow on Flickr

 

And so is this:

Photo: Rondal Partridge, 1940

Photo: Rondal Partridge, 1940

 

These look something like the subway of my story:

 

Photo: James Gridland, Flickr

Photo: James Gridland, Flickr

 

CID 2 tunnels

 

 

There are literally hundreds of great train songs. I asked Jim to come up with a playlist, but he couldn’t get it down to less than thirty, so I took an ax to it myself. Please add your favorite train songs through comments.

 

 

 

 

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